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I received my script yesterday and I just wanted to pass along a quick thanks for your in-depth analysis and suggestions. I was especially impressed with the story notes (marked right on my spec). Those will prove to be invaluable as I rewrite, Conduct Unbecoming.
It's funny. After this script was optioned, I found myself feeling a little arrogant. I thought, "Wow, that script is near-perfect." Now, after reading your notes, I realize how foolish my arrogance was.
Thanks again for your honest and insightful coverage. And best of luck in your future endeavors. I hope you don't mind if I email you every once and a while with a quick question or two. And remember, I'm just an email away. Please don't be strangers. Take care.Scott
I did receive your evaluation of my script, and quite timely, I might add. Thank you both. Your criticisms are well taken and you've sparked a renewed interest in me regarding this story. I'm faced with a page-1 rewrite and may wait until this summer to tackle it again.
Not many companies that provide the services you offer, come with strong reputations. But I am pleased to say that your insights are thorough, kind and direct. I'll gladly recommend you to others in the future.Matt
I received your evaluation last week. I have read both of your critiques and about half the marked-up script. Your evaluation was exactly what we needed to see--a refreshing dose of reality. I knew our script had problems going in. Now that the weaknesses have been pointed out, the rewrite should be an enjoyable journey.
Thank you for you continued interest. When we have completed the rewrite, I'll contact you. Please feel free to stay in touch.Gene Renaker
I received my script and your evaluations yesterday. I've read through the package only once, but I want you to know that I am both appreciative and impressed with your work. Your evaluations and recommendations are well developed and provide great guidance. I'm a strong believer in "When you're ready - it will happen," I just wish that I had been ready for you sooner in my writing career. I'm so pleased with your work, that I am going to send you another one of my scripts. Again, thanks for your assistance and responsiveness.
Ron
I read your analysis and feel that of all of the money and time I have spent trying hone my skills as a screenwriter, nothing comes close to what I received from you. While mine may be a slow process over the next several months, I plan to review your comments and suggestions and study them well. I appreciate your willingness to stay with me through the process. Again, thank you both for you time and insight.
Ron
I got both scripts today. First, let me thank you very much!! For the first time I feel I got an honest critique of my work.
Jill Cordell
I have known Bonnie Sanders and Andy Rodman for more than a decade. I know how easily I can get too close to my own work and lose objectivity. Over the years, Bonnie and Alan have given me an independent perspective on my own projects. The resulting scripts were vastly improved and better yet, they were salable.
It is easy to find "friends" who will tell you that your script is perfect and that your every word is gold. It is harder to find people like Andy and Bonnie who will tell you what you need to know if you want to grow as a writer. They have seen literally thousands of scripts and know how to identify script problems from major structural flaws down to simple format errors. At the same time, they are open-minded and avoid the simplistic solutions of the much-hyped script gurus.Charles Schlotter
Thank you Bonnie and Andy for being my partner in the exciting adventure of screenwriting. You listened to my crazy pitches, you critiqued my shaky first drafts, you helped me perfect my final script and in the process made me a better writer. But most importantly of all, you helped me sell my very first screenplay. I couldn't have done it without you.
Barbara Wanbaugh
"Breaking Free"I, Tim Sullivan was a lost teenager who daydreamed about the big bucks, models in my bed, warm weather and no heavy lifting. I dreamt of becoming a top comedy writer and producer in Hollywood with my own production company. Screenbrokers has me on the path to turning reverie into reality. Presently four of my sitcom specs are in the hands of producers at major studios.
Tim Sullivan